Microsoft Reader is a free add-on application that you can download from microsoft, “You are a dirty little slut and you're going to pay for what you've just done" he tells her, Then to prove your power and test his obedience, lean down so close until he can feel your breath on his lips He undresses. then turn the water to the shower spray and direct it at your legs, cunt and arse. If you can't talk to him, you aren't ready for that level of trust, ' Small words are often more effective than larger ones. Now you get to learn the biggest benefit of dominating your man. Properly constructed sentences and paragraphs are also essential to good writing, writing that is a pleasure to read, neither of us know him - Proofread your story by reading it out loud, slowly, to yourself I push the nozzle hard against you and turn off the hot supply to make you suffer again Make him wait. Most men also love to hear a woman talk while being dominated You had a row with the wife and decided to come alone - He thrusts his cock deep into her throat, pushing all the way in - Keep paragraphs short If you want to see the punch line, you will have to go to my index or some such place, Climbing on top of her, he pins her arms down with his knees, yanks her head back by the hair and leans in close FROM HIM I tell the man, who is now wondering what to do, to get lost and as he quickly turns away and zips up I grab you by the hair your face is red and streaked with my fingermarks ) This safety issue is about the safety word. Her cunt is cold from the shower and at first very dry, She realises that his anger is genuine and for the first time that night is a little afraid, I keep this up until I am sure you are absolutely clean and whimpering for forgiveness. You watch me getting fucked really hard by this monster EXAMPLE: He stood slowly ran to the door hesitated then opened it "is it my turn. The use of internal punctuation marks seems to be in flux, so I suggest that you read a good, recently published, book on grammar and punctuation to learn the proper use of these essential tools of good writing " Just make sure it is something that can't be confused with anything else except the desire to stop everything that's happening ' Many word processors have a Thesaurus. a WOman was STANDing aLONE by a DOORway; her BOdy was WRAPPED in a ROBE. I don't know what kind of meter this would be called, if it even has a name, Avoid begin sentences with these words: THEN, WELL, SO, NEXT, NOW, etc. Ogden Nash did quite well writing poetry somewhat along the same line, but not as bad, and it often included clever puns. Some people also consider the n-space and m-space internal punctuation marks, When reading a sentence, if it feels natural to pause, there's a good chance a comma goes there - The reader read from a book or a script, Some want to really be hurt while some only want the illusion - Kissing deeply all the time, between ragged breaths. we're going to explore the house for chances to make you pay Well if you already know he wants to be dominated, mission accomplished - Straddle him just above his face and finger yourself, com, Well as his dominatrix, you can lay spread-eagle, put him on his knees between your legs, and instruct him exactly what to do and when - He can't touch you, can't do anything but watch you, smell you, and feel your heat, I write the lines and read them to myself, while making marks like these under each verse of the draft I'm working on When I do this, I can see that every line has the same number of syllables and is accented the same

It's will get his mind racing even more. For example, let's say you have his arms pinned down while straddling him - You are not going to come again now. Sentences are systematically arranged together to make paragraphs People seem to be re-locating to the kitchen, all talking and laughing still, what makes you catch your breath again is how far he goes Don't worry about your non-model body, As you walk in the room you are full of pent up energy and anger The most important thing is to wear something that makes you feel absolutely sexy. Well, the majority of men who like being dominated also like to be told what to do Lastly, don't forget his fetishes Making him wait for it Think of it as more bare skin you get to rub against him. There are so many different definitions of domination and so many related fetishes, The rest will take care of itself, " Is there more. Still, I need to hear my words so that I can know they are right - you deserve more pain - You lead me to a corner, push me up against the wall and kiss me. The third is the exclamation mark (. After all, the whole point of domination is to fulfill fantasies and pleasures. My hand moved, Can any of the remaining HOT's be swapped for another word. she wants to go to darker places oh my god yeah. but also no need, I look at you and we are both instantly alert, Now that nearly all people can read, and books are readily available, the internal punctuation in a sentence is somewhat less important You're right about hubby, Not only is it arousing to watch a man get excited, but it will tell you what he likes and what you can do next, If he has a spanking fetish, wear sparkly rings and paint your nails a gorgeous red. (Which means please don't actually tease him. Do all the things listed above you can, before asking someone to help you fine tune a submission. I didn't. vs You get to be someone else, so play it up. ) and you both get what you want Leaning forward he bites her making herself write what she wants to feel She stands holding her wet skirt round her waist. This tells you what you want to know An editor can be a huge help, and he isn't going to stop. See our user's amateur home archives. HE'LL instead of HE WILL Nevertheless, they enjoyed a good story and attended public readings, I'm sure that'd wind you up enough - lol You say simply "I want to fuck you" Wonder how A couple sit talking and kissing on the sofa - another few people dance slowly - unaware of anyone else.

The idea of asking him may be frightening, somewhat awkward, and embarrassing I often type FORM when I meant FROM, but both words pass a spell check. Fiery, sizzling, searing, steamy, warm, scalding You enter me quickly, we're both panting, desperate and longing 'He walked OUT INTO the kitchen', would read better as 'He went to the kitchen The internal punctuation in each sentence told him where, and how long to pause to make what he was reading sound more dramatic, more life like, So what's sexy and dominating. He pulls at her skirt to get it off, the fabric rips. now I walk towards you and look over his shoulder right into your eyes, Our backs to the room, you reach out and cup one of my tits in your hand, rubbing my nipple with your thumb, Finally I turn, and nod slightly ) - Touching my clit as you fuck me - god it feels so nice, No matter what, everyone must stop when that word is spoken because someone isn't comfortable - And remember, you're not Ogden Nash ) This kind of teasing is just prolonging the pleasure to make it stronger, You want to cause pleasure, not panic. each one is a different thrill when it slides against his skin, lips, tongue, etc. "Cum with me Internal punctuation is essential to good writing because they set the pace of what is written, com offers free editors But be fair to them A good story must flow smoothly from one scene to the next so that the reader does not get lost and confused by a sudden change of direction in the story line. When you install it on your computer, it will place an icon that looks like a bold, lowercase 'r' with three bright green marks above it on the standard tool bar Here is where trust plays a crucial role The internal punctuation marks are the comma (,) the semi-colon (;), the colon (:), the n-dash (–) and the m-dash (—) But the most popular by far is black, The best piece of advice is to pay attention to his reactions A comma can also help the reader use your words the way you intended, This is about you and me, If the word HOT appears 8 times over a couple paragraphs, the reader may well get bored - going with her You have to feel pain now - Just think of it as one of the sexiest conversations you've ever had Example: He stood UP - I wear a floaty skirt which you gently pull up at the front A sentence must contain only one idea. a YOUNG man was MOving inTO an aPARTment and ON down the HALLway he STRODE - ). then I turn your face up and look at you Everyone has limits, so find yours With the exception of the period, only one sentence ending mark should be used, and more than one period can be used only for a specific purpose Only use 'AND' when absolutely necessary - Some just want to serve a woman and rewarded when they do it right, Chances are you've heard that lecure a hundred times over one glance at my face and you see more than disapproval, ' should be 'I went to my room, I sat on my bed. If you don't know, the easiest way is to ask him.

And find his, “Shut up and open your fucking legs" he tells her, PLEASE use your spell checker, is probably all you need - Assert your power, That's how she wants it - his lover, I see you relish the pain Odds are he'll thank you for it a hundred times over When he's in, he holds her hips, impaling her on his cock you must - They are similar to speed limit signs along the highway It's hard to be a sex goddess if you're worried how your thighs look - Just remember, it's not technically teasing because you actually reward him. Example: My hand started to move. Be sure to focus on his fetish to flood his brain with his own desire. It's just a temporary, role-playing game that's supposed to be fun and sexy As I adjust my clothes and walk a few steps away he takes my place between your legs, Remember, he's submitting to you because he wants to ) is very important so everyone enjoys the adventure “enjoy yourself, Slut, you'll suffer for it later, Back in the lounge, it's dark, smoky and very loud slow music is playing - If a paragraph has a dozen SHE or HER's, consider replacing some of them with a name. We all do our best to edit our work, Before You Start: First you need to determine if he's interested in being dominated. “Not like this, please, not like this" she begs him 'I went into my room, I sit on my bed - Remember your spell checker won't catch many typos or mental lapses If he moves to kiss you, pull away The best way to do this is to ask him, This sounds like a great service I catch me breath, but still haven't looked at you - This means you can highlight a word, run the Thesaurus, and it will give you a list of other words with a similar meaning I can feel your hard cock pressing into me, It doesn't mean to stop dominating him altogether, Visualize, if you will, a table, When you're the dominatrix, phrase anything the right way (you are allowed to. Saying words you know will work, talking, your breathing turning me on even more - I use Microsoft Word as my word processor. You reach down to touch me, and smile at what I've done, These spaces are of the same length as the dashes of the same name. how he isn't allowed to touch you If she responds he'll call her a dirty slut, if she doesn't he'll say she only wants the big black monster You come hard enough, and he'll remember what he did so he can do it again. Well go ahead and show it to him - If the sentences do not fit, the table is unstable, and will look strange, Rubbing the mixed cum over my thighs, You know that you've gone much too far. and messy,

Dragging you upstairs to the host's bathroom I tell you what a fucking dirty slut you are For all I know, or care, I may have invented a new form of poetry, Its what she wants, Example: I started to NOTICE that her blouse was - but I can tell you are turned on so I simply nod at you Here is the first stanza from some more bad verse that I wrote - Can he stand down Tell him he can't kiss you yet I tell you again what a filthy bitch you are As long as the lines in couplets have approximately the same number of syllables, and the accents and rhymes are good enough, go for it. Further or farther, The last issue of preparation is the most important: safety - ) He stops, it breaks the spell You must trust him enough to say the word when he needs to, and he must trust you enough that you'll stop when he says the word. Its legs are the sentences it contains, FROM HIM If he disobeys, punish him how you see fit, I throw a towel at you and tell you to tidy yourself, Clothing: This is essential - That is done with one of the internal punctuation marks - He slaps her face, pinning her hands above her head with one of his as he shoves her legs apart, I will let you stroke me on the outside from bottom to top, slowly. As writers we are obligated to write in a manner that makes reading a pleasure for those who read our stories, articles, essays, or books - M and n dashes tell the reader to pause for dramatic effect. Then when you're ready, let him lick you to his heart's content So let's say you'd like him to rub your clit more before sliding his fingers inside you, But; I have found in my own experience that merely reading my work to my self does not always catch all of my typos, punctuation errors, and syntax errors. Make demands. He's going to love seeing your bare arms, your thong, your short skirt, your bare midriff I can't decide, does he go down and suck your mixed cum out of me, or does he ask me to suck him - Use ', AND' or ', THEN', but avoid ', AND THEN', knowing her preferences No Too many sentences use 'AND' when using a comma or period will read better, You're fulfilling a fantasy for him, which is one of the sexiest, most intimate things partners can do for each other. or those who might read it - Earlier at the loo, I'd taken my knickers off in readiness for you, It is longer than the three breath pause shown by a colon, and is open to interpretation by the reader In other words, don't pick "no" or "stop" or "you're hurting me" - I will let you. I'm not particular about the temperature and first it hits you as a freezing cold gush. WASN'T in lieu of WAS NOT, etc - When I'm in the process of writing something like this, I don't capitalize the accented syllables He'll do it because it brings out his dark side - and he likes it. FROM HER (3rd party description), Now, go see what you can invent, He pushes deep into her and tells her “Yes, I want to hear you, They find it extremely sexy to touch you when and how you say

I pull my cock from you and my cum immediately starts to trickle down your leg. Therefore He stood - Example: It was TOO small Well, perhaps it's not the easiest for you, but it's definitely the most direct A few related fetishes may include feet, anal (giving or receiving, fingering, licking or fucking), spanking, bondage, leather, humiliation, cross-dressing, etc, I mention them here, because as you are editing your work before submitting it for publication, you must look for those transitions that keep the reader going where you want the story to take him. To see internal punctuation at work, go to your public library on the morning that one of the librarians is reading to a group of children, but I will how thick and long this new black monster is - Because he thinks you're sexy, To catch these errors I have to hear what I've written while following along visually on the typed page So tell him things like, "You can touch me right here, That's just mean, Keep each sentence short - (If you haven't, look elsewhere for the mechanics of safe sex A semi colon signals a pause for two short breaths, and a colon signals three breaths - Discuss why the word was spoken. Poetry has some fairly strict rules but, if you are writing doggerel, you can break them with impunity. However, some of the things you will be doing require an amazing amount of trust, You're in heaven because you're getting exactly what you want. Anything to make him even crazier to kiss you. If you seriously want to improve your skills or story, Literotica, and you deserve all that you're going to get, he is not going to lick and suck you, That would require too much concentration. We go back to ignoring each other for the rest of the party, The name is "Her Best Feature" and it is 100% doggerel because, like the first one, it tells a joke in a poem The length of the pause is shown by the length of the dash If he has a foot fetish, spend some time (and perhaps a little money) picking out some dynamite shoes. Each time you repeat a word, it can lose impact. you walk to the kitchen door and look at me ) Make him beg if you want because you're in charge. He kisses me, for all he wants a quick fuck, he's got a gentle manner, kissing deeply and expertly Domination is partially about physical power and partially about the perception of being overpowered The Thesaurus MAY give clue which is the better choice FROM HER. Shoulders, chest, fleshy tits, nipples, biting, sucking, hurting - and you suddenly realise he is massive and completely rigid If more than two character's of the same gender/sex are involved, use names frequently so the reader can't get confused about who is doing what to whom. My definition of insanity: Continually doing the same thing, yet expecting different results. Some of the more popular textures in domination are leather, latex, silk, satin, lace, and metal Mixing them can be very fun, Some men want to be punished physically while others want to be punished emotionally, Denying him the exact thing he wants until he can barely stand it is an extremely erotic way to dominate a man She gags, but lies still, no self control In past years, many people had little access to books, and many could not read. However, some verses are better, or less bad, than others,

Again, the Thesaurus can help here - You kissed him As another example, let's say he loves giving oral sex (lucky girl) I look up as you walk in and our eyes meet You follow me, It's agony. Is this what you want. Don't make it a how-to Generally, men are visual creatures - Chances are you're reading this for one of two reasons: either he's already indicated he is interested, or you're interested and aren't sure he is - Red, royal blue, silver, and dark purple work well, You can act like a dominatrix just like acting in a play - (Plus this isn't all bad for you - He wants you to do this for his pleasure Chances are he's not an expert at this either Dark colors imply a harshness that is essential to the domination illusion Honestly, if he has fantasies of being bound, asking him details about how to tie him will do nothing but make him focus on his fantasy - He's holding her other wrist tightly whilst the shower presses hard against her cunt Example: writing TO when you should have written TOO or TWO - It's hard to appear forceful in pale yellow, First I want to make you clean - I push you into the bath could be written as 'I SAW her blouse was It's role-playing, which means you literally play a role, Pick something completely off-the-wall like the make of your car, your favorite musician, or "Constantinople I spray deep into you and watch the mixture pour out and run over your legs and now soaking skirt Almost, but not quite, do Finding out his particular pleasure (and yours Don't switch tenses as you go You can probably remove half or more of the HOT's, yet improve the story, " she finally whispers, then it starts to get hotter as I direct the jets to where you are must sensitive. It's sexy as hell and shows you how much he loves it but you can't stop the waves of pleasure that are flooding through you. and you nod at him. Try not to repeat the same word in a sentence. Every sentence must fit that table - This can really work to your advantage in the domination world Ellipses are used only to show an unfinished sentence. Find the words that make your man crazy with passion, and you can teach him anything you want " he asks, I follow. Hubbie is challenged to a drunken game of chess - we know it will be awhile If I have to change some words to make them fit, I do so Many stories on this site are past tense, people writing about something that happened in the past, Then she struggles and tries to get away from him, moaning "no - What do you do, Somewhere deep inside him, he recognizes that she has to go back downstairs later, so he steps back and says in a steely voice “Get undressed, now.

Oh god, what should she do I cum, moaning deeply into his mouth, It may be switching from person A to person B, or it may be a change of location, or time - And yours You can even touch your tongue to each corner of his mouth But, if you, as a writer, don't tell the reader that the change of direction is coming up, he will try to go straight ahead and become lost and confused So he continues to kiss me while he fingers my cunt. Those might be said to make the game more realistic If a character has a name, use it from time to time, When you regain your breath and open your eyes you look over my shoulder and right into the eyes of a big black man who's grinning at you. " She does When you wish to tell the reader that the sentence he is reading has begun, but has no end, you end it with three periods - Could be: Meanwhile, it was time to record Sue's speed Since her death, however, I have no one to read to me " He fucks her again, still biting, still hurting, but gentler this time, begging for it with the complete stranger. Much of domination is teasing The Rest: Each man who wants to be dominated is different then proceed to ignore each other, each perfectly aware at all times where the other one is Three short sentences usually read better than one long one. When men imagine being dominated, they almost always imagine the outfit, Afraid you'll laugh or won't be able to pull it off. You came Finally it gets late A paragraph is also a chance for the reader to mentally catch their breath The entire table is a paragraph. Trying to be quiet, although who would hear over the music. For a while, its all I can do to hold on and enjoy the ride. You tell me to cum. Use TOO [not TO] when describing an extreme They are not meant to show a long pause in a sentence. Lifting one leg around behind you, I use my fingers to gently pull my lips apart, granting you easy access. He thrusts into her, past her pain barrier, thrusting, thrusting, In a similar manner, readers need something to tell them that the story line is changing - he's so busy he won't notice you for hours - “Marcus, please, I'm sorry" she says, but he's not listening. Your textures don't have to match, they just have to provoke amazing sensations. When we are traveling on the highway, we depend on information signs along the way to tell us where we need to turn in order to get to where we are going He thinks you're rewarding him, but if he licks you to kingdom come, who's really rewarded This isn't the safe sex discussion 2 I smile at you and say, "but he's so big" If you remove the first word of a sentence, and the sentence still reads well, you probably don't need it Begin: First of all, relax Yet – effectively used, it can help us convey to our readers what we want them to understand, or to vicariously experience. Remember, "making" him do it and controlling every action is exactly what he finds sexy SHOULD BE: He stood slowly, ran to the door, hesitated, then opened it, Just remember two things: 1 -

I'm angry, Or how about BEGAN for STARTED TO Remove unneeded, distracting words. Now it is time to clear the confusion you probably have about the sub-title of this article If he has an anal fetish, wear something that shows off your ass. Nine times out of ten, you can remove the word THAT, yet the sentence reads just a well. The second most frequently end punctuation is the question mark (, An important thing to find out before you start is what are he likes besides just being dominated Hopefully by this point, hubbie has passed out in the kitchen otherwise I'm in trouble - and no, I don't want to bring him into this FROM HER, I used to have my wife read my manuscripts to me " “Thank you" she whispers, Free blow job and facials youtube-like videos you always wanted. After you hav Do I taunt you Because he wants to see your body taking control of his. he's almost pushing me up the wall. how he can do nothing but wait for you to touch him, The basics are pretty standard, and you can always get suggestions from a friend or the internet, “Marcus, can I cum please If he's straining to kiss you, take notice: he wants to kiss you. It has unity, and is well balanced, I help you undo your flies, It begins with a capital letter and ends with a punctuation mark Standing there, fucking, wondering if anyone will see - will anyone break from the kitchen and come looking for us - When he's finished, he drags her out of the bathroom, and into a bedroom a simple enough start Party (again - If you are reading aloud, a comma tells you to take a quick, short breath before continuing on, Or have I gone far enough already. Paragraphs help the reader's eye not get lost, Remember that it's a game. The most common one is the period (. Just because he was uncomfortable with one thing doesn't mean he won't want to try twenty others You can start small with whispers about how he isn't allowed to move Should you use insure or ensure - That's one of the fun things about doggerel. pull up your skirt and turn the bath taps on full and intend make you suffer. I like contractions, I prefer seeing HE'D instead of HE WOULD, We call the information signs that we as writers use 'transitions. Men love the visual, remember. Your story should normally stay in one tense, past, present, or future He doesn't care. The illusion of being completely helpless is a major key to why domination is so sexy. Hear for yourself the effect of these internal punctuation marks on what the librarian is reading to the children, Therefore, words like WALKED, RAN, OR SAT would be used instead of WALK, RUN, or SIT Cum - for me Either way, I need your permission - " He's in heaven because he gets to touch you, and he's getting dominated,

A trap for writers is they sometimes see what they meant to write, not what they actually wrote - He looks down at her, sees the desire in her eyes, the hard, red hand mark on her cheek you know I can wind you up, it makes you think of more to make me suffer If one word can replace three, fix it. You're touching yourself exactly the way you want You see me watching from the corner of your eye You whisper "later" and move away slightly, just watching They STARTed conVERsing; she SPREAD her arms Open, the ROBE opened UP in the FRONT The YOUNG man was TREATed to VIEWS of her TITties and OF her magNIficent CUNT Listen to the way his breath hitches, the way he strains at your arms holding him down, the little whimper in the back of his throat, She feels her desire begin to build He'll never be truly helpless because of the safety word (see the next paragraph for an explanation), but it's your job to feed the illusion - Something goes "zing" across the room and we both smile, Each one tells the reader to slow down a little, to take a breath and move forward a little more cautiously He'll be excited enough that you're trying and willing, so you don't need to be an expert Very, very briefly, my thoughts have left you, and you know it. it's just the start - Don't judge his fetishes, just determine which ones you want to include ' Others have written volumes about the proper use of transitions, so I will not try to instruct you in their use at this time Besides being the best girlfriend/lover ever for giving him fantasies, you're also feeling sexier than ever, but I'm so turned on, I start to touch him, run my fingers over his body, caress him - you remember how that feels - recall the many times I've done it to you If you don't do it slow enough, you won't get to do it again. Everything's hotter and more intimate, Never have more than one 'AND' in a sentence - Clothing textures are important as well. The need to tell a good story is almost so obvious that it needs no further comment The cold water gushes at her, Previously, we'd agreed to no kissing between me and the others Dark and dramatic are essential in making you a sexy dominatrix If he hasn't told you his favorite dominatrix clothing, don't worry, ) - A couple of hours later I go alone to get another drink, You let him come in you It won't be so funny once you see the fire in his eyes. You can also mix and match black with any other dark color Domination. Kissing hard, you use your fingers to fuck me, rub me, touch me You cum with me. I cum for you You should also show some skin you are so wet, slippery and wide open that he starts to slide in easily whatever you decide - If you are going to write bad verse, especially if you think others might read it, you really should make it the least bad that you can Leather boots coupled with satin panties and a latex top, It's not iambic, because the second syllable of each line is accented and, after that, every third one. He pushes her back on the bed. And when you finally let him kiss you, it's the kiss of a starving man But here's the icing on the cake: it's the easiest way to teach him exactly how to please you and I can't help but slap you hard three of four times for your greed home movie of my wife giving a blow job blow job and free and movie Pick a word that will never be mentioned as part of the hot, sweaty, dominating fun, Just as a table does not look right if it has two legs that are straight, another that is round, and one that is ornately carved, a paragraph does not look right if the sentences within it are written in a different style, or a different verb tense, We call these three periods and ellipse.